All Comments on 'At The Cabin With My Sister'

a little thready in spots, especially beginningbut overall a very nice effort, thank you i enjoyed it.

Erotic literture very well done excellent story. Keep up the grear story.

Wonderful story, well written, good balance. I have not checked, but I hope you have some other stories on file. Write some more soon!!!

What a very erotic story. I loved it and you will continue it.

This story is stunning and as close to perfection as I could ever hope to see- the kind of stuff that keeps me coming back to this site on a regular basis. There isn't a single thing I could criticise or find fault with. Simply amazingly well told and definitely a rare gem.

What's more is that I don't think it needs a part two or serialization- it's just fine *as is*. Unless, of course, you really want to write more, in which case I would be more than happy to SEE more!

DAMN!!! I wish I could fuck Kim!!!

We need more of this story. Hope it continues.

very enjoyable... please keep it going1!!

YES more please !!!!!!!!

Mesmerized! Please finish it!

Sexmate

Please continue it soon. Please Keep it going with the sisters maby a threesum or a pregnancy or two. Story was a little slow at the begining but a great finish.

I hope we will get the next chapter soon. Can't wait for further adventures of these three. Hopefully Mom and Dad will come to the cabin soon...and join in! They might even bring the aunt--the wife of the uncle who had died--for some fun as well. She is probably pretty horny by now.

All I can say is 'Wow'. After wading through a sea of generally soporific and clumsily drafted jerk-off tales,on this site and others, this one stopped me in my jaded tracks. The pacing, character development, and attention to realistic nuances, such as weather, were so skillfully executed, I was drawn into the story in a way that I have never experienced within this genre before. The final, lakeside, scene was hot enough to make me want to slap on sunblock and open a beer! This submission succeeds through its flawless combination of potent eroticism married with believable characters, who speak and act like actual people. Again, this story is defined by excellent writing, and a steadfast adherence to realistic portrayals of the unpredictable nature of human behavior, and everyone's innate desire to seek and attain pleasure, sometimes in the most unexpected ways...Toward the end of the story, I was so engrossed in the action, I missed (ignored, actually) three telephone calls. Good job, cheers.

This was the kind of situation where adult siblings might actually do this. It was a great story and it was plausible.

Three Whole pages--Two wonderful encounters---Very erotic stuff--And the author did not screw it up with something anal---Goes to show---

Very good loved it

The historic review of their personal feeling and observations of the past was a very appropriate.

All i have to say is that this submission ROCKS! Good job and make more like it.

Keep it with the sisters and no anal, loved the easy way the story flowed. Connie was my fav but It still was great, do a sequel for sure :)

Eh, I'll be a party pooper here... maybe just because i'm getting jaded.

I liked the story but again, I find any incest story (at least every one that i've read here for the past 2 years) to be wholly implausible. The idea just won't sell with me.

Although I enjoyed the story, the pacing was great and the length was appropriate. Nice setting too, something quite different in comparison to all the indoor fucking and the story isn't as cheesy as some.

So uh, just ignore my rating because they don't always tell the whole story.

More power to you...!

I really love this story. Here you have three adults who have been close all of there lives and each of them has lusted for at least one sibling in the past. Finally, they reach a point in their lives where each is without a relationship and their desires for each other are overwhelming. Very good!

Nookiehunter

sister must coaprate with brother as my bahna does it boys who wants to fuck my sis call me at 03008418452.my SISTER is hot and naked laing with me at bed and playing with my cock

That was a fabulous story. Well written, great plot. Be interesting to see what happens when they wake up... or their next working bee

unrealistic once they started rolling on the ground and insulting each other that would have ended the weekend one of them would have got up and went home keep it sounding believable

The story is excellent.

I'm asking the autor if he can write the same story (or a smilar one) with the sister as a subject. I'd like to know feelings of a sister while deciding to have an incest relationship.

Very good writing on the fantasy of what would have happened. Loved the story that didn't center around all sex or all backstory, had a good combination of each. Would love to see a sequel

A stunningly beautiful, incredibly arousing story.

The absolute best I've read in a long, long while.

You are one hell of a writer. Thank you.

and a very real story. I rarely give a five, but this deserved it.

Fantastic and sounds so real

What a fantastic story. This one I will read and reread as I sure identify with story and characters.

Enjoyable story ,location,made a change from many

of the incest stories,this one had reality about it.

How about another chapter to see how their

relationships progress?

Maybe they had to extend their time? Or maybe they all painted naked for the rest of the time that weekend? endless possibilities.

I think someone's gonna get pregnant! or maybe two someone's.

Two very good sisters....one lucky guy.....

we all should be soo lucky !

What a great, well told story. Ahh, kids. ! True love, unbreakable. Thank You.

Both subtle and brazen

The guilt.....

Both laden and succumbed