All Comments on 'At the Jazz Club'

Four - because it was a good story but I had a problem with Bob not getting involved.

Involved to where he got her off to one side and questioned her, this - if it ever happened, was to be with him present to watch? She just, all of a sudden said to herself, hell yes - lets go, Bob - I'll see you tomorrow - huh?

Now he sits at home, not happy. Guess what, you wrote this woman out to be a woman who has no respect for him and he sits at home, upset and then in the morning, he is calm and wants to start having threesomes. You lost your continuity.

She turns out to be quite the slut, not just a hotwife but a slut that has no morals whatsoever...is this the first part?

Thanks.