by grumpyg
Nice debut; look forward to reading more of Brian's adventures (hopefully as he persuades his as-yet-unnamed wife to recapture their former romance).
How the heck did I miss Sally's name? It top and tails the story. Anyhow, really pleased you've now written a sequel.
Sensually desciptive 'cultural exchange' adventures, albeit sadly linguistically limited!
Penmanship training sequels requested, by femme/domme enthusiast fans? EG: As a submissive husband & a shaven nudist, British female readers demand reciprocal exchanges involving Heidi and Klaus's personal film-making records.
I enjoyed this story very much. It had everything from being pissed at his wife and expressing it quite well in the way he described her when he mentioned her. Then he was quite taken by the beauty of the woman sunbathing close by, causing his blood to flow to parts that would become outstanding. This let to a very interesting and erotic story.