All Comments on 'At Their Mercy'

Wow what a build up. I hope you will write more of this story. Seems to me there could be a nice hot sexy romance between the 3 of them and maybe even some babies. More please.

more of this story please

Fantastic story telling and build up so far! I hope you’ll continue and maybe flesh out the relationship between them even more like maybe a discussion why the sisters decided to share themselves with each other and their older brother and just how far they’re going to take their relationship!

Great start. My only criticism is you shouldn't start a sentence with she when multiple people are involved in the action. Please continue this story. Five stars.

Part two is written, just needs some proofing and then to be submitted. Plan for the story is a slow burn, likely around 40-50k-ish words before wrapping up. Hope you all like the journey.

I deffinitly want to read the continuation

All build up, no story....

Great story. Fun read. I got the sisters mixed up a few times but who cares.

Please continue, great story so far.

Fuck!

Hot as fuck!

Need more!

Enjoyed it, but the shower scene confused me. Too much micromanagement of who was touching whom, and where.

Great story I gave it 5 stars can’t wait for the next part thanks for writing it!!

No Chapter 5?

The shower scene is indeed much too complicated. When I start to read just across to see, when it's done, I start reducing the stars in my mind. As the rest of the story is written well, it's 4 stars here.

Was great up until the shower scene, was super confused on what was going on. Hope there is another part

Great!

I didn't mid the shower scene at all -- it was likely complicated for the 3 in the shower to know who is touching who too, and they were there :)

Great story, well written, and you left plenty of room at the end for further adventures.