All Comments on 'At World's End Pt. 01'

Excellent job and even more so for a first time. I look forward to reading more of your work.

It's a nice start. Now let's see how you work it from here on.

Good start, not familiar with the Zombie material you referenced at the beginning but enjoy the genre. Nice twist with the immunity the MC is experiencing, maybe, and how it plays out should be fun.

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Cheers

Good first part homie; am definitely interested in more

My 2 cents

A good start. I liked the characters and the story line. Keep it going and thanks for your time and imagination.

He isn't much of a hero! How can he leave children to die knowing that they could be eaten alive? If he let that happened, then their is no story. He has already let a female neighbor be eaten alive with a care. Telling us that his life was worth more than someone's cries for help. The only way to redeem himself is by getting all three survivors to the University.

Fucking cool.

Just like the best of these series' start

Never trust an elevator in a zombie apocalypse...

Awesome start, love the change in character, not wanting to risk himself for a stranger, which would only happen in films, keep it going 5/5

J'aime beaucoup le début. Et pour le mec qui dit qu'il est pas un heroe en commentaire ba je confirme il l'a dit lui même c'est just un mec banale

Continue mec je vais suivre cette série

Well written, good story.

As emotional and sad as this story is I think the author turned Ray into a cruel heartless bastard who absolutely doesn't deserve to live especially being the only one immune from infection.

And for Ray to just abandon Liz and her siblings was just barbaric.But silver lining Ray lost his only form of entertainment namely Porn,so Ray is now destitute of ever watching porn to pass the time.