All Comments on 'Atalanta vs. Love'

Aww ended way too soon, good one

Another great story Jackie. Ive always been such a fan of Jason and the Argonauts, the stories of Hercules, Medusa, and all those other tales. Many thanks.

Well done. The truth dawned on me once the race was over but their awakening to love was beautifully told.

Well told. An interesting story that I figured out with the first apple. I Hope it fares well in the contest.

A well thought out twist on a, very, old tale. And the clever word play is worthy of the genre of myth.

That was truly a lovely twist on the story / stories. Atalanta was such a boss queen. Thanks for sharing Jackie!!!

A delightful twist and two lovely characters.

Was sweet and delightful, and in the traditions of the old myths. Loved it.

“Might I remind you … “. If Disney isn’t interested, they miss out, yet so much more than delightful. Loved it. Thanks.

Not the your best story in my book but it's about muy personal preferences . A nice well shapped story just written like a fable. With some spice of love, 5 stars anyway.

I like the twist on the tale. This is delightful story, very well written and paced. "Rodomontade"--I don't think I've seen that in a Literotica story before! I would have liked to have read the spicy climax of their relationship drawn out a bit more, but that's minor. I enjoyed it a lot and especially enjoyed the good prose.

So good! Lovely.

Five stars!!! I loved the line, “it was only the sound of love's latest victory.” Wonderfully written, well told and beautifully crafted. I’m so glad that you stopped by to read one of my stories. Now I can enjoy all of yours.

Thank you!

Rose Monroe 🌹

Always 5 stars!

Well isn’t this a delightful change of pace! To paraphrase the old saying, well behaved women rarely get turned into lions. Or maybe I’m not remembering that exactly right. In any case, I guess it’s no wonder the ancient Greek gods passed into memory given that they were so easily fooled and mollified.

Looking at the ledger, it appears I am now indebted to you one golden apple and one popsicle. Best wishes for your Kyra goal.

Apples are called paradiser‘s too, in Europe and now it makes sense … adam and eva, the apple, the paradiser …. And now atalanta and hippomené well it makes sense …. AND do you remember that song: „it started with a kiss ….“ Hot chocolate wonderful sweet song fitting perfect

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Wow, that was different. Love it. I'm not hung up on all sex I love a well crafted tale. Thank you