Athenium Ch. 01

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The redhead reappears in my mind's eye, and she smiles wickedly. Her willing prisoner comes down from his three-day orgasm, falling into a deep sleep. He won't remember his time here, I realize. She doesn't want him to be ashamed: that doesn't fit into her plan.

No, she wants his curiosity, his hunger, alive and well. He will be drawn to her again, she realizes, and she wants him to step into her with just as much vigor as he did the first time. She won't let him feel the complicated stigma of a burgeoning fetish, because it might keep him from coming back.

She raises him to the surface lazily. A bubble forms on the top of the goo as the surface tries one last time to retain its treasure, but it splits, and his head reemerges. Athenium retreats from his throat and slithers across his lips as it rejoins the main mass: the conclusion of an extended kiss that neither lover wanted to end.

He is deposited on goo that solidifies beneath him. He is safe and unharmed, still sleeping peacefully, and no one will ever have any idea that he wanted this. Craved this. It will be his secret, and his secret will be our secret.

Wait. No. I never agreed to that, I say. What have you made me do, Athenium?

"Let's make a new agreement. If I am to be a prison for the worst of your kind, then you can never allow the ones who come to me willingly to be put to shame. Let them come, don't let anyone stop them," She says. A fresh euphoria surrounds me and penetrates my flesh as she fantasizes his return. Oh, all of the possibilities, the things she will do to him next time...

"He's addicted, Athenium. You can't have humans as your drug, I can't allow it," I say.

"You will. Or l...I'll send your prisoners back to you, a thousand times more murderous than they were when you gave them to me," She threatens.

I feel my fear reverberated back to me. I taste the sour acid, but this time, she doesn't comfort me. In my mind's eye, the redhead licks her lips and closes her eyes, moaning to herself.

"You're going to let me go, right?" I ask.

"For now," she purrs, rolling a dozen oiled breasts across the length of me one more time for good measure. It won't work, she knows, I am too frightened of her to feel aroused right now. But it's all about the long game, at this point.

"I'll see you again soon. There is so much you haven't shared, but next time, we'll...discuss at greater length," The redhead says, exaggerating the last word. As I rise to the surface, I hear one final warning.

"We'll be seeing each other again, and again, and again, negotiator."

I grit my teeth as I begin to rise, fighting the decadent ooze's ministrations.

"Someday, you won't go back up. I'll steal you. I'll keep you...and you'll want me to."

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thegreat_pretenderthegreat_pretenderover 4 years ago
Absolutely perfect

I hope you’ll continue writing for us, because your work is incredible!

skelligrockskelligrockover 4 years ago
Great story

I'm not a fan of goo girls, but this story was really great and oddly romantic

I loved that Athenium was emphatic and became overcome by exposure to the new emotions of love and her reluctance to give up her new lover.

Both immersions was very detailed and well written. The description of being her prisoner and being held in an endless climax would be enough to tempt anyone.

I was a little surprised that she let the narrator go because as I was reading it I assumed that the deal would be that she let Marco go but would keep him. Although as Athenium says she will keep seductively working on him until one day he will give in to her and stay.

I do wonder about Athenium's background. The setting of Antarctica suggest the shoggoths in Lovecraft's "At The Mountains of Madness", but Athenium seems much nicer and more intelligent. Has she reached her limit in size or will she continue to grow? And will she have offspring, maybe by splitting into two or joining with a human?

I think you have a talent for writing and capturing your reader's attention so I do hope you will be able to write more stories and post here, whether they are sequels or new stories.

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