All Comments on 'Athletic Trainer'

Head over heels, not head over heals.

Lie up on the bed, not lay up on the bed.

Lewd, not lude.

Spanx, not spanks for women's underwear.

The hymen, or maidenhead, is at the opening of the vagina, not inside and definitely not near the bottom.

Hope this helps with your next story.

Great stories! Keep going!

Few detail errors, spelling, etc... Perfectly fine since I paid nothing for this and am not grading an essay or thesis... Have enjoyed your work.

This is a great story, and would have been perfect but for some of the mistakes pointed out by other commentators, and an irritating bit where you slipped from first-person to third-person narrative.

I suggest that when you've finished a story, you should put it aside for a couple of days and then re-read it as if it were someone else's work. That should help…

But keep on writing! This is excellent!

... and pay no attention to the grammar trolls! :) I ignored any mis-steps you made

[ did you make any? I didn't notice :) ] to continue reading your story. Really really liked it... thank you!

enjoyed it, well written...but yes, some niggling errors

Also, story never addresses how Rachel and Tom tell the coaching staff, etc...how did the administration react, etc?