All Comments on 'Audrey'

Not an every day plot or story line, although arrived at somewhat usual ending. Interesting characters. Keep going.

Like the other said this is an unusual way to go about it but I like it. Usually 1 page stories are rushed or thin on plot but you managed 2 well developed characters and romance AND some erotica all in 1 page. Great job! I hope you decide to continue Audrey and Tim as a series but if not, i will keep an eye out for your other stuff.

It seems unfinished. Almost like there is more to come

Only you can develop charcaters and story in such a short form

thanks for sharing

is there more to come?.

yur story is lovely

thanks again

Neo

We never got to know the characters

In my opinion, SierraSprite is one of the most talented contributors to Literotica. This little jewel is a five-star example of why I feel that way!

What a hoot!!! This is hilarious, sexy, and fun. Technically, it is well-developed, sophisticated and incredibly short. As with most of Sprite's work, leaves you wanting, hoping, wishing for more.

THANKS

I’m n love with Audrey