All Comments on 'August 2000 Ch. 01'

by Dani-Amande

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smoothed273smoothed273about 1 year ago

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

dude thats hot!!!!!

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
As hot...

as a late summer's day.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Wish I were Mark

I can imagine being Mark in that story and can only hope you write a sequel where Mark gets what I would want in the situation

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Give Mark some DICK!!!

My prick got HARD reading this story, as well as, fantancizing about it. Give me some MORE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Luved it!

Its great! I hope u keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Very Hot !!

Wow... thats a hot story !! Love the way Mark dressing like his sister for the seduction bits... hope the second part of the sequel will be hotter... Mark really need to be fucked ...!!

shaded_oneshaded_oneover 20 years ago
need to hear more

The story was very hot. I can't wait to read more. Really one of the best I have read and I feel it can only get better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Mark needs fucked!!

Way hot!! I can't wait for Mark to get fucked. Maybe Mary can dress Mark and her boyfriend and have them perform for her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
can't wait for you next installment

Will Mary find out about Mark?

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Sweet

Real nice, hope you keep up the story.

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