All Comments on 'August: A Ghost Story'

and the best one of yours I have read so far !! I did not see any part of this coming... I read it straight through. Hey, I really enjoyed every paragraph. You GOT my attention and held it from beginning to end. Thanks! I just hope you enjoyed writing it and reading it and sending it off ! Scotty//slowrdr@aol.com

well written with flowing dialog. Yet, the sudden transitions in the emotional motivation of the protagonist repeatedly interrupted my suspension of disbelief. Perhaps an editor could have directed the author's attention to places in the story line...

The best written story I have found here so far. You seem to be a writer who knows literature well. All the characters are very vivid, even the minor characters. Skillful writing, flawless. You made an implausible story incredibly believable.

Thanks. I keep revising it and revising it. I might just have to publish it as is, lol.

Really, Only 4 comments. Certainly more worthy Then 4 comments. I found this an external ordinary story, You certainly have made it to the top 5 authors on the site that I look for. I read a few of your stories already and I'm going to read the rest of them now. Thank you very much. Gentili@charter.net

I am pleased you enjoyed this one. It was my very first attempt at a novel length work. ;)

oh i loved the twists and somewhat surprising turns.

It started to feel like there was a theme there, like some piece of the backstory that might explain why they were so drawn to each other, how they met up again, what made them so paranormally potent for George and Helen?

Loved the intelligent banter, the forthright characters, and the 'old flames' tag. five stars