by Sylviafan
It was difficult for me to keep track of all of the characters that were revealed on Page 1. I counted 13, in all, and I resorted to pen and paper to remember their places in the family tree. However, as the story unfolded, I realized pen and paper was quite unnecessary. There is only Angela and David; everyone else is an orbiting satellite.
I love the way Angela is written. Timid. Cautious. Unconfident. Yet simultaneously, she is wholesome. She appreciates the simple pleasures of life, and she has a moral compass that is obviously present in her decision-making. She has been deeply traumatized by way of the death of her spouse. I understand this fact in the way she awkwardly sits away from the rest of the family, and in the way her home is being held together by a few metaphorical nuts and bolts. The description of Angela as a "pale, wildwood flower" springs into my mind.
A couple of other brief observations: I was a huge fan of the pen to paper written correspondence. I smiled when I read "I think you had better burn this letter." The phrase "DELETE THIS TEXT" has been around for a long, long time, only tweaked a bit.
It's a small thing, but I liked how the restaurant was "ok." It had hit and miss service, as most restaurants do. I appreciated this detail, trivial as it was.
I well crafted story. Very nice. We should all love and respect our relatives that way.
Thank you for not including any nonsense about pre-cum. A very enjoyable yarn.
So many details desribed. So little SEX.....
A story writer, that knows how to write a tale.... Thank you! 5 STARS!!!!
Bravo!! Loved the story from start to finish. You made the context and your aunt so real. Thank you.
I found this story charming and erotic in an understated way, it kept me enthralled for the full duration even to the extent of reading it, in my head, in a Welsh accent boyo!
Once again a fantastic story!
Thanks for all your hard work and sharing your stories with us.
Exciting and Erotic at the beginning and several years afterwards. .. but also so nice and charming when the aunt started to be very old
Honesty this is an amazing story. Had me do hooked. I could read books with this type of writing.
Absolutely wonderful story. I had a relationship with a woman in similar circumstances but she was not my aunt. This story brings back wonderful memories, it is so well written. Thank you.
A lovely story, beautifully expressed. A bit of a slow start, but that's just me being impatient. You are a gifted writer.
Can't say enough good about this story so it does get all five stars. It took a little bit to get rolling but the wait was worth it. A very touching and love filled story with a happy ending. Pleased to see that Aunt Angela wasn't made out to be the fabulous and beautiful sex starved woman found in so many of these stories. It was kind of a bummer when she was wearing knickers instead of panties lol, but that's understandable seeing as where the story took place. Just for grins I Googled where Angela lived and found that Merthyr is not a very desirable places to live in Wales. Glad that David was able to bring some happiness into her life.
I have read most of your stories and I think this is one of my favorites. Beautiful, tender, and realistically erotic.
Definitely one of your better stories so far that’s for sure. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
An absolutely wonderful story, by a very good writer. BRAVO!!! Never give up the gift of your words. JEF
I am a writer by trade and, if I am being honest, I could not match the skill of storytelling here by this writer.
I found self loving Angela too carnaly and getting excited with description of her thoughts wanting her nephew I have similar thoughts about my sister in law and her daughter my neice when I'm in their home I have elections all the time and try to linger kisses sometimes I have a raging hard on when kissing them I like it when they go in the toilet to urinate once she came back from school.and had to dash into the loo I heard her piss like it would never end .when she was 16 I used to play German porn and phoned her number and Hele the s phone so she could Hear one woman being fuck in a restaurant scene with 7 men taking her in turns anaglypta an in her cunt o knew my nice was masterbsting to the sounds and I could hear her cum I masterbatr at the same time trying to ss she had her orgasm
Great story thank you very much they were very relatable characters the love shown was so touching