All Comments on 'Aunt Annie's Anal Antics'

Find a good editor.

Your story would've been outstanding if it weren't for the fact of the 'little mistakes' I spotted. Your story WAS good "butt" it could've been GREAT if you didn't have the little things messing you up!

I know a great little editor that doesn't like dates with authors that make 'little mistakes', especially when there's no need to with all the help available 'on request'. She told me that if you try harder in your editing, she may request and introduction. That's all I can tell you.

i thought it was very good unlike some others i read over the mistakes for the story dont look to chop it down

Hope you knocked up your aunt too.my aunt and I have been living together 5 yrs 15 yrs older than me knocked her up 3 times I ass fuck to this day she 55 yrs old my friend and I gangbang her every weekend she loves it when has 2 cocks in her one in her ass and one down her throat by time weekend is done has bite marks on her neck and tits even has hard time walking for 2 days my is our own slut I talk my aunt to on vacation together to nudist resort let 20 black guys take her on make hardcore porn movie