All Comments on 'Aunt Carla Ch. 01'

story was good for your first. lots of build up but the sex scene needs more detail and eroticism. u should continue with this story line though.

A great first time effort! Like the other poster said; good build up, and good story line. I had hoped the scene at the end would have been more detailed, but hopefully this is just part of the story. I look forward to reading more.

It is the humiliation that will make this saga! How imaginative are you! How will she control you and make you her's.