by TheGraduate88
****Good start. Thanks for sharing.
Yes I agree with chytown. Very good start. I finished the chapter and said damn, I wanted more. 5stars
Looking forward to reading more. Thank you.
I like it ! We're is chapter 2
Good story. Thanks.
Fantastic start!
I like the story a lot. AAAA++++
Great beginning. Hope there's more soon.