by Tall_cool_one
I've really enjoyed this series despite the occasional typo. I doubt any father would be so easily placated about incest between his wife and son but that's all part of the plot. Keep writing and updating us on Faye, Icy, the swinger group and of course Mom.
Was there really an 8 year period between chapters? I like the characters and since chapters are usually only a page long I eagerly encourage you to write and release more quickly. I do wish chapters were longer. Maybe throw in a little more non-sex character development. Hope there's a chapter with Melanie's dad and step mom.
this a great story want more parts I want to see him and Melanie get married and maybe Faye and his mum get divorced and live with him and Melanie when they get married and maybe Icy gives him a few million dollars and maybe a few pregnancies with the women he has fucked so far and hope there would be more women for him to fuck like Melanie's mum or maybe if he had some cousins he didn't know about that come to visit Just a few ideas for more chapters keep up the good work