by Jarhead14
Rules be damned - and they are good rules - but this just seems fine -
And well put together -
The beginning of this story had me crying continuously. Very tender. If only I was a fan of mother/son incest. Still. Loved the beginning.
Some Guy.
IT WAS STILL A FINE STORY. If this was, indeed, your first effort, I thought it was an outstanding Five Star read. Please give us many more.
A very good story, and it's hard to believe that it is a first effort. Never mind the complaint about category, the story is one which crosses boundaries, and the important thing is that it is a first-class read.
this should have been in the incest category. Perhaps surprisingly to you, not all guys are attracted to their mothers.
This is a great story.I hope you write many more as you have the talent to become one of Literotica's best. A little more care in the proofreading department wouldn't hurt but the story doesn't need any improving. Best of luck with future stories.