All Comments on 'Aunt Jane Revisited Ch. 01'

Disgusting tripe!

I loved it and hope to see more never mind the commentators who've never written anything. I'd love it they added her scat to it, especially if she's eating so healthy.

This is to the readers who disliked this story so much because of the subject matter that they felt we all had to know about it. My hope is that they did not vote. The obvious option for them, which they did not take, as they did press on and read it through, was just to go on to another story whose plot was not offensive to them. Voting should be on the merits of the story, whether it was well written and showed some skill, not whether you agree with what the characters were doing.

I did think the story was well written and constructed well.

Just a bit too much pissing for me.

This had the potential to be a good story line if it didn't involve pissing.

.nuff said

loved the story, her dressed ready for sex and especially the pissing!

Interesting.

That escalated quickly.

OK but it escalated too fast. You hardly described your aunt's body and she is suddenly pissing in your mouth. I like pissing games but he could have just watched her pee first.