All Comments on 'Aunt Julie'

Might have been a good story but your grammar is so bad it was painful.

It's obvious that English is not your first language, a good editor would help to smooth over the linguistic difficulties.

What would be the point of fucking if you were passed out and could remember absolute nothing??? STUPID!

A triple 7 pilot would not be smoking pot and doing those other drugs. Maybe make her a train conductor.

Even Concorde never flew that high! Tounge? Is that like a lounge or do you mean tongue?

Keep the details where they matter. We didn't need to know parent or uncles names.

Check your facts.

So, is this some new plane we do not know about? It must be since it flies so high. The Blackbird only operates between 70 and 80,000 feet.

An editor would help the story a lot. May be worth rewriting and resubmitting.

I think it's a pretty good story. Could have sexed it up a bit more but still ok.

These damn anonymous critics that know one little fact and come across like they wrote the dictionary really get my balls in a knot. So they know about the highest altitudes some planes fly, big f'nng deal. If they are so damn smart why don't they submit a story rather than a lame criticism. Losers!!!!!!!!!

i want to see Julie put to sleep

I want to see the author put to sleep!

I'm grateful for all of the views, everyone's input and comments, thanks ❤️ . Annnnd thank you also for the exciting and provocative comment from an Anonymous visitor - I'm honoured! 👄