by Marigny
What name change? “L or ELL” are short for Linda. Nice start, hopefully Ch 2 will be a little more more exciting. Thanks for what you’ve done so far.. 3 *
Unfortunately though, I rarely look for 2nd chapters or sequels, so will miss the best part...the seduction☹️
Gave you a 4* for the way it was written...but also confused by the name change, but just for a moment.
nice start and building heat.hoping for more chapters.you could provide ur old account
for more stories to read,cause i like the way you write:)keep them coming.
Reminds me of my aunt and myself in Northern Michigan on vacation in the late 70s
It's got possibilities so I'll wait for Ch. 2 and 3.