All Comments on 'Aunt Maggie Ch. 03'

When I came across this story and noticed it was Chapter 3, I went to read the first two chapters. Having read the first chapter, I clicked for Chapter 2 and found that it is identical to Chapter 1. Since there is a long span of time between chapters, is chapter 2 still available to be posted?

With regard to chapter two, I clicked on it and pulled it up. Here is the link. Hope this helps? https://www.literotica.com/s/aunt-maggie-ch-02

I now have read all 3 chapters! I need to read more since I don't write as much as I use to. I will always read up till I can not see any more which I hope never happens! This story was by far the best so far even though the other 2 were fantastic but this one tells the story of how Billy came to exist! Awesome! I want a family like this and I will be the grandmother to them hehehe I gave you 5 stars cause it was perfect reading!

Wow! You are a very talented author. Not only have you made me want a family like that, but you got me wet. Gave you 5 stars!

Too much over the top, rampant sex with no emotion lost my interest. 3*

Fantastically hot and dirty story! I'm not sure I can wait 3 years for the next chapter!

Will there be anymore to the Mom's Big Bed saga?

Eagerly awaiting Governess Part 4!

Keep up the good work!

you know, i really wanted to like this story but it got to be too much starting in on the 2nd chapter. too many characters and too many stories being told instead of us experiencing it first hand, as it were. What is vitally important with a story as complex as this is that there aren't so so many mistakes. There was one sentence i could not even begin to parse and another that took me a while to figure out only by rearranging the words, subtracting a word and adding another. Also: far too many missing words. I shake my head every time an admittedly amateur writer never even rereads his own creation! Why should i have to suffer through reading it when you have OBVIOUSLY not done the same?! In short: this story is a hot mess! Read your own work and get an editor! He or she may call you up scratching their heads quite a few times. Be prepared. If your response is "i can't be arsed", then hang up the pen!