by billy172
"Aunt Peggy was laughing. I decided to take it as a joke, and just let it go. I crossed my legs, though, so she couldn't see the growing bulge in my pants from the twitching erection that was growing. Threats of spanking turn me on. I couldn't help it. But, I sure wasn't going to let on about it to my Aunt Peggy!"
You've used growing twice in the same sentence. That's poor writing.
This is the department of Redundancy Department.
Hey, Anonymous. Does yours grow when you go searching for something to criticize and you find it?
Made me think it's about time my partner bent me over again. Orcs been a while since my last spanking and caning. Thank you.
and then it brought me to tears.
Just when I truly realized how she carried out her desire for a half of century :( Seeing him, craving to do this to him, and yet not being able to, a living hell.
Thank you Bill, it's a beautiful story you wrote.