by dan_kildall
I enjoyed this chapter. Look forward to the next.
I was surprised Kayla came back into the story in a sexual way so quickly. I have some guesses and suggestions for where she and Tony might end up in this story.
The scene with Jill, Sammi, Amy and Danny was hot. Having Sammi and Jill get together sort of ties up their threads in this story. Once Amy moves out, they can be shifted off-stage.
Hi Dan,
Your ability to keep up the quality of this story is awesome. I did wonder if it might tail off a bit as time passed - but no, you've maintained the same high level for all 19 chapters.
I'm so looking forward to chapter 20 and seeing how all this develops further. The inclusion of Kayla, JJ and Sammi in the 'harem' was an inspired move.
I'm hoping for an eventual orgy between every character involved in this saga. Maybe at a masked ball to help keep identities hidden, or something similar - possibly ! I'm sure Sandi will be able to come up with a solution to resolve matters............. ;o)
Just PLEASE don't leave it too long before we see the next episode, eh !
Thanks once again for a truly great read.
Rapier875
Very hot. You have managed to add more players and still keep the flow of the story.
OUTSTANDING!!!!
Every chapter it gets harder and harder to suspend disbelief. The characters have these deep-held principles that the next paragraph just mystically decide to break. Also, no company is having a going away party or offering references to employees who walk off the job with zero notice. The sex scenes are hot, but the story around them is really falling apart.
Although the author has added more characters to the story, each one has been developed in depth and breadth. Therefore, each character easily and logically falls into place withn the story. From a psychological point of view, it is amazing how easily characters become self-aware, self-confident, and accept their inner self without guilt, shame or fear. If humans could accept themselves as easily, without fear of rejection, I wonder how better off the human race would be? Unfortunately, fiction is always much better than real life.