by perineyum
May I suggest proofreading a it closer, paying closer attention to sentence structure. But on a whole you have a good story.
This story isn't good, it's GREAT !
Your development of desire, needs, tension and frustration were all experienced as I read along. So comefortable a fit, your story and my senses as I read, that I felt as one with you.
Good story but the narration was kind of mechanical and a little jerky. Nice that Aunty shared her panties with the MC but too bad all he got in her pussy was his fingers.