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silverslyderalmost 9 years agoEditor Needed
Please, you desperately need someone to proofread your work. I'm enjoying the story but I almost gave it up on this one because it's so hard to have to constantly respell words in my head and mentally fix the mistakes.
Anonymousover 8 years agoNot happy
I'm pretty sure that everyone will be pissed if you leave this story here with that ending so please don't end it here too many stories go unfinished on this site
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