All Comments on 'Aurora - Wings of the Goddess Pt. 01'

Just a wonderful erotic adventure, and I'm glad I'm along for the ride. Five Stars!

Thanks Crusader, your appreciation makes the countless hours of writing all worth it.

my friend, have a wonderful talent. Please keep going because I'm hooked on your story.

You have created a fun little story. Just one question on continuity. what happened with the laundry in the stuff at the hotel,. They should still have the rooms registered. Maybe the start of the next chapter.

Many thanks for your comment and it's good to know you were engaged enough to spot that. There is a reference to the belongings back at the hotel, pointing to the expectation that Beck and Bragg would return for a second night. Which is what they did, though the gory details weren't recorded. But the adventure continues...