All Comments on 'Australian Visitor Pt. 01'

by herefortheplot

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ardoardoabout 4 years ago
Hey

Great Story !

jcrjl2009jcrjl2009about 4 years ago
Yeah

Cant wait for Pt 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Poor Old English Language

Where shall we start - punctuation? Grammar? Spelling?

Fuck it, I just can't be bothered.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

You NEED to change your name, herefortheplot. There is NO PLOT in your stories and you have appalling grammar and punctuation.

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGabout 3 years ago
SHE IS A ......

cheating slut bitch worthless whore that can't be trusted

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