by JuanaSalsa
POV changes are a major bummer for the reader. Just learn how to write third person. Also, don’t really want to read about an old guy fucking some fat heifer.
It all began with a typo...
This is a marvelous tale, adroitly composed and paced, with sweet characters and a lovely, ironic sense. Geekdom is hereby enriched.
Love it!
Funny, touching, erotic, and sweet. Am looking forward to reading Everything you have posted.
Gracias!
[Ignore anonymous "heifer-hater", that sad, bitter, but obviously perfect human being.]
A beautiful story showing that you can find love regardless of age or body type.
Thank you for sharing your story 😊
Excellent love story. I only wish Marco was younger. He has so little time to raise their child. Believe me, Time is at warp speed at that age.
Five well deserved Stars.
Good, a little slow to start but then the characters start to come out. 5 stsrs
Excellent story and writing!
Romantic, sexy, and fun!
Love the detailed character development.