All Comments on 'Auto-Correct: The Truth in the Typo'

by JuanaSalsa

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Cute story but not very likely.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowalmost 2 years ago

That was very well told. I loved it.

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77almost 2 years ago

This story gets better with every reading! =]

5 stars, of course!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

POV changes are a major bummer for the reader. Just learn how to write third person. Also, don’t really want to read about an old guy fucking some fat heifer.

yowseryowseralmost 2 years ago

It all began with a typo...

This is a marvelous tale, adroitly composed and paced, with sweet characters and a lovely, ironic sense. Geekdom is hereby enriched.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 2 years ago

Good story! I don't like sushi but I do like pussy.

5

SeaReaderSeaReaderalmost 2 years ago

Love it!

Funny, touching, erotic, and sweet. Am looking forward to reading Everything you have posted.

Gracias!

[Ignore anonymous "heifer-hater", that sad, bitter, but obviously perfect human being.]

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Excellent story. But no discussion of marriage?

maxx308maxx308almost 2 years ago

A beautiful story showing that you can find love regardless of age or body type.

Thank you for sharing your story 😊

RiverMayaRiverMayaalmost 2 years ago

Loved this, definitely 5 ☆s.

Sweepup50Sweepup50almost 2 years ago

Enjoyable story from start to finish.

Crusader235Crusader235almost 2 years ago

Excellent love story. I only wish Marco was younger. He has so little time to raise their child. Believe me, Time is at warp speed at that age.

Five well deserved Stars.

Ravey19Ravey19almost 2 years ago

Good, a little slow to start but then the characters start to come out. 5 stsrs

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 2 years ago

Excellent story and writing!

Romantic, sexy, and fun!

Love the detailed character development.

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