by sexgundam666
I honestly hate when people use the word "mum" instead of mom. I could tolerate it if you had said that these characters were of English decent or British.
Other than that, you keep spelling "wonder" as "wander"
Besides what I just typed, THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!
Unfortunately, that's how we write things over here. I could learn to write in the American way but, like how you can't stand 'mum' or 'wonder' I find it hard to tolerate stuff like 'mom' or 'color'.