All Comments on 'Ava and/or Eva Pt. 06'

by Passions_Fool

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Passions_FoolPassions_Foolover 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

Next part should be up next Saturday. Glad you are enjoying the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

This is a good story. Keep the flow going and it will make a big hit. Grammar was very good for reading. Looking for the next chapter, onward.

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