All Comments on 'Avery's Desire Pt. 08'

This is a romantic story which it is a pleasure to read. Both Avery and Rick are really sympathetic characters with whom empathy is easy. The language is well used, the plot not too involved. In other words this is one of the nicest stories on site.

I look forward to many more chapters

Thank you for the comment, I appreciate it greatly, and I am so glad that you like the characters. I put a lot of time and thought into my stories so it's nice to read what people think of them. Thanks again ~Chance~

I look forward to each chapter. Keep up the good work.

this keeps me wanting to read more and more. I love that it draws you in. you feel like you know the characters personally and are intertwined within their lives as well. Great Story I cannot wait for chapter 9... thanks for the great read

Hot!

Perfect combination.

I love love love this chapter! i was so hoping that rick and avery would finally do the deed but its also kind of adrable that he wants to wait till avery is totaly his. please hurry and get chapter 9 done i really want to see where things progress with the band and with kat. she seems like kind of a bitch. great work keep it up!!

Just wait asshole ..both you and that bitch Brian will see how desire will sore up like a Phoenix..just wait idiots