All Comments on 'Avery's Desire Pt. 11'

I enjoy reading this story, probably because it's built around a rock band just like mine. The end of this chapter omg, hope he's ok. Keep it up.

So glad you like it. I'm working on chapter 12 now, so it should be done in a few days. It takes me a while to write because I mostly do it while the kids are at school, or at night when they are in bed lol I love getting comments and feedback though so thankn you very much for your comment I really appreciate it. :)

~Chance~

I totally know what you mean :) It's so encouraging to get comments but they don't come often. And it also takes me a while to write my own story now that I went back to work so I totally understand, esp if you've got kids to take care of. This was a long chapter though, so it was worth the wait. Now the cliffhanger will keep us reading anyway lol

Omg I felt so sorry for Avery at the end of this. I can't believe what an ass Mikey is. I'm sitting here biting my nails waiting for the next chapter.

Babe, this chapter was intense but so good. As always you never fail to please.

you know i always love reading ur stories and cant wait til mikey gets what is coming to him cant wait to read it in the next chapter !!!!!!!!!!

Mikey can go trip over a knife for all I care. I’m gonna cry 😭. Avery my poor baby.