All Comments on 'Avery's Desire Pt. 14'

I Loved that Avery is coming around. I'm Hoping he continue's to improve so that he can tell Rick and the police what he remembers very soon.

I am so frustrated as to why none of this sick mentally deranged Mikey's continued threats seem to be taken seriously by anyone involved! The detective should have been informed immediately so that he could be kept from getting anywhere near Avery in the hospital. In the very least he should have someone tailing him 24/7! He is going to act out again the first chance that he gets, and Avery is still his primary target. It drives me crazy that no one seems to be doing much of anything to prevent it... once again! Didn't anyone learn anything? This fucker is dangerous!!!

I agree with JRSON. There should at least be a cop posted outside Avery’s room — especially now that the detective has proof Mikey was in their apartment.

Man, I hope Avery isn’t blind in both eyes. Next chapter, please!

im so happy Avery has woken from his coma... I want Mickey caught red handed... its time he reaps what he has sewn all this time.. Such an EVIL DANGEROUS Jerk!!! He needs Prison and to become Big Bubba's bed mate... im so glad Avery is awake and I know he will be strong enough to tell everything to the police... im ready for the next chapter...

I read chap 13 a few days ago and ive just read this chapter today. Seeing your name reminded me I hadn't read it yet. Loved it, but now I'm worried that Mikey might try to make sure Avery doesn't talk... I'm looking forward to reading more.

I'm so glad that is awake, now does he talk and at least move a little? Is Mikey going to Jail. I hope all this and more will be coming soon. Thank-You for this fantastic story.

This is all kind of fucked up but a great story. I almost stopped reading after the first rape. It was brushed aside. I hoped it would be addressed like I hoped lube would be introduced. Guess the rape-y aspect will lead to love everlasting? Bit twisted, yeah?