All Comments on 'Avocado'

Well thought out and great build up. Knew what was going to happen but the anticipation was part of the suspense that made this story so exceptional. Please continue. Again, Well done.

That was very well done. I recall some friends from University, they had been a couple almost the entire time we were there. They experimented a bit and decided to finally try a threesome (mfm) only things didn’t work out so well. She wasn’t as keen on the idea as he was. She ended up getting married to the other guy. It falls into the category of be careful what you wish for.

Tess (UK)

This one is the very best cuckold story I have ever read. I so enjoyed every second of reading this, I came myself three times reading this I'll be back to read it again and agin, it's so hot I would of loved to be in his place. I would have let them fuck me after and is would have sucked off each one of them for her to show how much I loved her for doing this for me. Do write another one soon and let me know when you do. We need to chat pretty please your sweetboysub4u.his

Cuck a Doodle Do - we have a winner for all those cucks who enjoy being second class citizens in their own lives. This one is right up their alley. A selfish and narcissistic slut. A pathetic little pervert trying to be more than he is and plenty of cum for the cucks to lick up later. Don’t worry while you are alone jerking off we are laughing out butts of as we take the ass of your wife or girlfriend. No thanks needed always willing to help out the morons and idiots of the world

I read this a few months ago, and it's stuck with me since. Engagement can be a bit of a crap shoot on these sites, and the militant manly men are always ready to stick their oar in, but I wanted you to know that there are people out there who really appreciate your writing, and you've reached further and deeper than you might think. Thank you.

but could have done without the shirts!

When towards the end he didn't suck a cock, I was disappointed, but now I see that would have screwed up the ending.

You might enjoy one of my stories....

I would have liked this story better had the faked setup not been quite so rapey-had the bull been dominant and forceful towards Megan and threatening and humiliating towards the cuck, the story would have been more powerful. But you have skills as a writer, and the ending was good.

Start of an exciting marriage. And maybe next time the fun will go a little farther…