All Comments on 'Awakened to the Forbidden Ch. 02'

Unless they are abusive. I do not expect everyone to enjoy my stories and am open to feedback of any kind. Calling me or any other writers on this site assholes because you don't like an aspect of the story, sorry but that's not feedback. If you want to know why certain things are common in stories, take a look at the world around you. Pretty reflective. As for the catagory of this story, I won't change it because of one short scene that wasn't meant to turn people on.

Fantastic story, I loved reading these first 2 chapters. I can't wait to read the remaining chapter.

As written above- Thank you. The story is refreshing, loving, believable. And as such, WE- who appreciate a well written story of any genre- thank you.

I do not often comment, but I do remain anonymous. If I have nothing constructive to say, I do not even rate the story. Keep up the very good work.

You've described the love and tension between these three siblings very well. I'm awaiting the next chapter to learn what happens between Colin and Ashley. What will Stephanie's reaction be? Don't keep us in suspense forever.

Based on what I have read and my 'knowledge' of your writing style through the first two chapters I envision at least 4 to give this story the time it needs. Well done and I will be checking back for more.

i love the characters you have going in this story, i hope you continue it!

In your profile, it says that the next parts of your two longer stories "will be coming out within the next few weeks". That was half a year ago. What happened?

For all those who haven't checked out my profile, I just wanted to say I'm sorry it's taken so long. I have several books getting published and I've gotten sidetracked for longer than intended, but I've gone over all my literotica stories and am working on continuing them.

Awakened to the forbidden will get at least two more chapters. I don't know if I will be able to keep writing here after that, but I have a commitment to my readers here and I promise to fulfill.

well i truley hope you havnt forgotten this series. i def would like to find out more about what happens [;

Such a great story and the characters are easy to love. I hope this works out between them though I wonder how Collin found his sister at the cousins house, timing seems too convenient. Too bad he didn't break an arm on each guy for a reminder not to touch with out permission.

The only thing missing was Colin not busting their balls and leaving them impotent