All Comments on 'Awakening'

Believable, sympathetic characters, very good pacing, and just the right amount of magic in the mix. I think I understand, in the context of the story, why the initial sex didn't go further/hotter... but you could have (and still could, for that matter, if you chose to expand this chapter)taken it much further.

Great story! That was hot! I hope you continue with the Bought series.

Nicely played, is there something to tie into the books better than just the mention of the courts and Queen? I like how you did it though, look forward to more from you on this subject.

Loved it, I hope you build on to this with a second chapter!