All Comments on 'Awakening'

A lot of stories here are just about two random people with no build up. I love how you added some depth; it makes it a helluva lot more fun to read.

You developed your characters well. I'd love to see you expand on them!!

this was great. i enjoyed it just as much as your first submission, which is one of my favorites. Keep it up. look forward to reading more from you.

This is your second piece of writing on here? You're a natural.

Continue this story; the ending was so undignified. You developed these characters so well for a simple BJ, you can't just abandon them like that! The whole virgin thing at marriage but so... wild was utterly hot and amazing. Write more! Write more! Write more! :) :)

Amazing story. I can't believe that this was your second. It was really great. :D

Hot, sweet, sexy, and loving, with a little humor thrown in via the dream sequence - what's not to like about this vignette? Nothing, that's what.

not a perfect 5...?

We need more like this. I read your other story as well and I simply love your style. Your writing style is unique but very easy to read.

I, like a few others below me, hope you continue with these two love birds. It's always refreshing to see married couples, not random strangers fucking!

I never knew a sex scene with just a blow job could be that erotic. i swear u almost had me cuming.