All Comments on 'Awakening'

Nice buildup of the storyline towards a loving climax. Needs to have at least one more sequel.

Well-written, believable, and, most important, really, really hot! I agree with commentor #1....begs for a sequel with their friend.

Thanks for the heat.

Lesbian stories aren't usually my first choice, but I was gripped by 'Awakening' as soon as I started. Thanks Rachel_Marie... now I'm going to go back and read more of your work!

The first vignette, about the bad sex with hubby, made me uncomfortable, as if I were actually peeking into someone's bedroom. It was very well-written . . . I hope not from Rachel's personal experience. From there on, the slow buildup between the women got hotter and hotter. I loved the story and look forward to chapter 2.

Well written, sexy, and believable. Sadly, the characters could represent so many unfulfilled married women who need more from love than a quick hard cock every third night. I'd like to read more about these three women. Sophie

Very nice, sensative, and well written story.

Difficult to feel sorry for these characters. They chose to marry men for their status. Choose love over money maybe sadness won't be the emotions that defines everyday life.

This is a good story,. However, I do wish pussy hair had been abundant on these ladies. I love to rake it back with both of my hands to eat, OMG, to eat my own mom's thick hairy pussy for her. Mom is 39 and I just turned 20. Mom doesn't want me to shave my pussy either. I guess we are both just into lots of hair down there. I doubt that will ever change. Seriously, after we eat my cousin, we both decided there will never be any nasty looking sharp stubble or ingrown hairs poking out of pimples on pussy mounds for either of us to eat. Swollen clits are great, pimples needing mashed, are just dammed sickening.