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All Comments on 'Awakening Ch. 01: A Good Day'

by Greychapel

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Incest?

Well it was a good buildup and makes u wonder why it is in incest since nothing happened in the whole story and the dreams seemed real odd

ManoBlueManoBlueover 5 years ago
Lame

Question to everyone, why is every protagonist on this site losers? As someone who isn't where is cool guy stories with good writing.

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 5 years ago
Hope there will be more soon

building to a hot sexy story if you keep it going.

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I am here in an attempt to blend crisp, classy prose with delightfully lewd eroticism.