by Rachel_Marie_30
This was so hot - well done! I hope you keep this series going for a while; excellent writing, and excellent descriptions of the scenario.
Oh my GOD, these stories are so HOT !!!! Very well written,sweet ,sexy oh so sensual !!!! You got my cunt dripping. I hope you will do more chapters!!!!
DEE from NJ
This was really hot! I read a lot of erotica so when a story creates a hard-on, you know it's good! I didn't particularly like the segue in the bedroom. It could use a small rewrite...and I was dying for one of these fucking minxes to kiss Lisa! But damn...this was good!