All Comments on 'Awakening Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Wow!

Hot as always! Can't wait for the next one!

bossleman2001@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
holy smoke!

This was so hot - well done! I hope you keep this series going for a while; excellent writing, and excellent descriptions of the scenario.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Whew !!!!!!

Oh my GOD, these stories are so HOT !!!! Very well written,sweet ,sexy oh so sensual !!!! You got my cunt dripping. I hope you will do more chapters!!!!

DEE from NJ

derek33derek33about 9 years ago
Good!

This was really hot! I read a lot of erotica so when a story creates a hard-on, you know it's good! I didn't particularly like the segue in the bedroom. It could use a small rewrite...and I was dying for one of these fucking minxes to kiss Lisa! But damn...this was good!

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