All Comments on 'Awakening Pt. 04'

Enjoyed the story a lot. Very nice flow, however I would I like to have it continue for few more pages. Definitely room for another chapter. Thanks for taking the time to write this and for sharing.

You simply must continue to contribute whether or not future stories focus on Jo and Dylan. Their story is tense, poignant, highly erotic, so it is easy to imagine how exciting other tales might be.

I had to stop reading this at ch3. Ch4 confused me so bad.

Only gave 1 star.

Joey.

Great, great, loved it but i confess, it ended too soon.

Such a great piece of work. I loved it so much - I just wish it hadn't ended almost abruptly. Keep writing - You have a gift

This was great, and hot! But please could you write more????