All Comments on 'Awakenings Ch. 06'

I keep trying to get into this story, but in my opinion it's your worst story. Really as everyone and myself have said over and over, finish what you have started already. They are your better stories. Maybe you will find a better direction for this one when you come back to it. Otherwise, I say, find an ending soon.

I enjoy reading it and eagerly await the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Your writing has been good, but has become too loose, jumping around with neither bridging nor warning of the change. Cannot continue with this series as it has become impossoble to follow.