by IJS0904
Would love to read another chapter. Have Martina and John get together with his family.
My mind took off with the premise and I imagined it in the city water supply.
A good story with a really sucky ending. Why write a good story and then not complete it? 3* for the ending!
As always, when you can't stick with just a brother/sister love story, you totally wipe away my interest. I will never understand why people who write sibling incest always insist on bringing the parents into the mix. I hate that! You earned a 1/5 from me.