by cleareyedguy
The story telling in this is something else! Very well done, I only wish it was longer!
Great story, thanks for sharing. Frankie
Well written and enjoyable! Bravo Zulu!
When is the next chapter to cover her august visit?
Wonderful introduction to round two incest . . .
Length is ideal.
Build-up on point.
Characters, and descriptions there of, ideal.
Awesome. C'mon, part II.