All Comments on 'Axiom Ch. 05'

That was the best chapter of any story I think I have ever read on this website and beyond... The emotions of the last two pages.... They were so raw. I'm in awe. I'm going back to reread and reread until my eyes fall out of my head (figuratively speaking of course). Bravo! And, please, continue forth. I love this story of yours.

Holy moly! Keep up the great work. Really looking forward to the next chapter!

I love your use of imagery and simile.

...and also Philippe Starck.

The next chapter better be here TOMORROW!

NO excuses.

Thank you for updating! It is a wonderful story. Keep writing!

To refresh my memory, I went back and read the entire series at one sitting. OMG you write so well, the use of language, of words to draw a picture of two people who have been fooling themselves that they were just "friends with benefits". They knew the truth early on, but neither one had the courage to face it. Now Adrian is facing a major test that could ruin him and he needs Gwyneth to be his rock, his anchor and she will be so willing.

I am loving this story, five stars for sure.

Disarmingly simple in the number of ingredients, yet bold in their exotic combination. I've enjoyed the way you use art, design and Gwyneth's Japanese ethnicity as accents against the minimalist palette. It's a delectable tale.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon

I seriously cannot compose anything in my head other than 'wow'

by no doubt, this is one of the best stories in this category on the site. to say anything more would be repeating what someone else has said already. i am eagerly waiting for the next chapters.

This is possibly the best story I have read on this site. You are a gifted writer. I find myself trying to read faster, to jump ahead in the story, because I am so eager to know what's going on. You seamlessly switch perspectives and timelines. You set the scene with explicit detail, but still leave enough to the imagination that I am involved in the pictures I form. I eagerly await the next chapter =]

Very good.

Please keep writing, can't wait to find out more!

I love it when people battle falling in utter surrender to love!

I do not recall ever commenting before but this story has compelled me to. This is very beautiful writing, possibly the most moving, engaging and entertaining story I have ever read on this site. Thank you for sharing your talent.

drunk wrote it. not good

The last anonymous is a moron.:) great stuff!!

Definitely a masterful construct, a marvellous story.