All Comments on 'Aztec Treasure Ch. 31-40'

As always , well done . Thanks for the quick update this time around 😎

Excited at my edge of the seat feeling. Love it. Keep up the great work. Im glad you are. Your my favorite writer bc of how you intertwine the characters

I'd like to say one thing: FUCK. Ok, with that out of the way, you're excellent at building up tension in a story (and not just sexual tension). The last page and a half were a constant background hum of 'just a little more, just a little more.' And so, we wait. Excellent work as always

Very exciting and enjoyable as always. I really do enjoy your stories, and will look forward to your next chapter.

Will the First Husband turn into a werepanther if he doesn't die? That would work to the advantage of the panthers, because if they kill Julio who else would be able to keep the line alive? He might not be the best choice, but he would be a viable sperm donor for both of the females when their time to reproduce came around. It could also free his wife to move on to become a werewolf, as it's obvious there's no love lost between them.

"I leaped onto the Doctor's back, my claws digging in as my teeth opened wide. I crushed his skull like an eggshell, and he dropped bonelessly to the floor."

I'm an accountant... and this is how I handle auditors.

Just sayin'.

"He worked at the big Duluth law firm of Dewey, DeWitt & Howe. "

These are the guys I use for all my legal work.

That being said, I always default to the Bart Simpson defense - "What do you want? I didn't do it, and if I did do it, nobody saw me do it, and if anyone says they DID see me do it, they're liars!"

my only question is which were will wind up being his mate.

Dewee , dowit, and how ,I love like doowy cheathem and how from the three stooges

We're cats don't have a mate so how will they save the President's husband

This segment was ill conceived and just a bit silly... The plan was like something that middle school boys would have come up with... The bait thing was seriously unrealistic...

-jaye-

Years ago, I knew a back street garage that had a sign over the door reading "Nockerman Leggatt" (Knock 'em and leg it). Just sayin'.

5* - thanks for sharing,

Dixon (UK)