by partwolf
5 stars as always! Love the story & can't wait to read more!! Please don't make us wait too long!!!!
Great chapter(s)... I'm very sorry that Vic and Spider Monkey had to go into hiding... not only from the cartel, but from the FBI as well... so much for gratitude from the Government for services rendered.
Getting to the last page of a new post from you always instills a feeling of dread. 'What will the cliffhanger be this time? How will I survive the agony between posts?' As cliffhangers go, this one is mild, especially for you.
Cliffhanger ramble aside, excellent installment and I loved the reveal that the people doing the apprehending were actually Pack. I was wondering how they got people there that quickly, usually the government is slower than that, with some bureaucracy involved. (Also, was that a Monster Hunter reference or just something the DSS would actually handle?)
Yeah, nice update, I'm glad Spider didn't die, but sad she and Vic can't go home and on the run AGAIN!!
Getting harder to read, dragging with details, like unnecessary fillers. And cliffhanger after cliffhanger at the end of every chapter is just irritating. Is this a read or a soap opera? Have to pause for real life in the middle of a chapter since that's where things drag.
Ignore Anonymous' complant about too many details, I like details that flesh out the narrative, especially ones that involve places that I've been and sights that I have seen. Helps me relive the memories. Ignore the comments about the cliffhanger chapter endings too.