All Comments on 'Aztec Treasure Ch. 81: End'

OMG HELL YEAH

I love reading your stories. Thank you for sharing them with us.

Charlie

A great wrap up but was there a chapter missing?? The wedding, the pregnancy announcement, the kidnapping? It took more than half the chapter to get caught up!

I love ready your stories, and look forward to the upcoming reads. I have ready your stories more then once and enjoy reading them over. Thanks for the great stories.

Thanks again

Greyfox

Thank you for taking time out in your life to write these stories. I have been an avid reader of yours for many years now. Again thank you for your time but just as important thank you for bringing happiness in this world.

Regards,

Craig

wow. this wrap up is amazing. I love the Treasure series. and I really hope you have more of it on the way.

and I'm not sure if it was done on purpose but with the CIA guy. I couldn't help but remember the phrase from the first Treasure.

"Don't be a Todd"

Oh man. I so look forward to seeing how Maya grows and how her wolf/jaguar hybrid fits into future stories. Loving all your qork, look forward to the next read...

Well, in the words of Donkey 'Aww, look at our little mutant babies!' But seriously, wolf/jaguar combo (it's not really a true hybrid, I guess) shifters is pretty awesome. Love your stories and hope you continue writing for a long time to come, because everything I've read of yours is top notch.

Great story I really enjoy all of your work and look forward to more

The treasure series is an excellent read also enjoy the complicated plots with many twists and turns, looking forward to many more treasure stories.

Best o e yet cant wait for more storyies

That part at the end was sweet and unexpected. I kind of wondered what would happen and now we know. May there be many more to come.

Your series just keeps getting better and better with time. I'm grateful you share your work with us. Please continue to keep us entertained with your wonderful stories and let's all pray for a safe and respectful world

fantastic. it sort of dragged with all the trip details, but the side stories more than made up for it. where do we go from here?

In the beginning, the finish seemed to be a little rushed... and then it was so full of action, etc. that it didn't feel rushed at all. Great ending to a wonderful story. Can't wait to read your next story... You need to go back and tie up loose ends in Sharkbait Down Under for sure. (Probably a couple of other stories as well). Happy writting for you, and Happy reading for us (your fans!!!)

Outstanding! Thank you for sharing your ever improving talent with us.

An excellent ending with seeds for continuance. I couldn't be happier with this story.

Thank You!

I love your work, especially since you continue on with the same characters. We grow close to them as old friends and always want to know what happens next. Again, thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Congrats on the Award !

Oh my that was great ,wow a duel shifter very cool .you are great , you bring life to them , thank you.

this story so needs another book to delve into the dual shifter nature!

That has to be one of your best endings yet

Great ending !

Great story. Thank you for taking the time to write this incredible story.

Absolutely fantastic. Everytime you went into the nice bits like the bike rides I was expecting some form of chaos. Loved little Maya with hef ability to be wolf or jaguar.

Was expecting both Spider and the president to have to be changed possibly through attacks on them both but now the series is over. Well, at least for now.

5⛤ throughout.

Most excellent series! Thank you for it all!

Ah-whoo, too dámn cute!

(2nd read-through, all 4 books)

This has been my first foray into were fiction, although I've read lots of other stuff over the past 60 years (shit, that long?), and I've thoroughly enjoyed it. Nicely convoluted plot, pretty good English - well done.

5* every chapter - thanks for sharing.

Dixon (UK)

"Since she was a wolf, so was the pup inside her. "

So Rory gave birth to a wolf cub, I could have sworn Heather previously gave birth to human children despite being in wolf shape. I wonder how being born as a wolf cub works since werewolves don't shift until in their teens. Is this cub spending 17 years in wolf shape before shifting to human first time, having to learn to speak, or does it grow at wolf speed being able to change to a human teenager at 1-2 years age? Either way would create some odd problems.

Lance and Maria has one big problem in their relationship. Jaguars age as humans while wolves live much longer. Lance will find himself alone "soon".

There is a new part in the Treasure series being published on inkitt at the moment.

Me thinks Luna has decided to tinker a bit with her children