All Comments on 'Azure Planet Ch. 02'

by BatteriesNotIncluded

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
This reminds me a bit of "Slave to the Servants."

But in this story she isn't a slave and gets to choose which family she joins.

BatteriesNotIncludedBatteriesNotIncludedabout 12 years agoAuthor
thanks for the feedback

I can appreciate the similarities you see. Yes they are called warriors. Yes they are from another planet. Yes there is more than one guy. We're only 2 chapters into the story. Give it a chance to show it isn't the same story. A Slave to Servants is a wonderful series, but that doesn't mean it is the first or only story to have aliens and multiple sex partners.

Thanks for viewing everyone.

chibicakeschibicakesabout 12 years ago
Great Job

I think this a great start and I can't wait for more.

xoxo

C.

MIssWhip32164MIssWhip32164about 11 years ago
;)

Fabulous story.... I want more. To know what happens :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
please finish story

i have just read this story's chapters--please finish it---i would really like to know what happens next to lyra and the clan she chose... :)

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