by hotpup
Nice story, but the bold on the first page was really tense on the eyes
Given the characteristics of the whole family,
the bold print, if a bother, was one easily
adjusted to. Hard to believe was that the
females of the family ALL had such dynamic dimensions.
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh Myyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!
It was pretty fucking hot. Kinda like a family of mice bumping in to one another in a maze, and then fucking each other to damn death! Looking forward to the next chapter.
hotpup:
If your going to write about family lovin' you should cover most of the bases and it looks like you are going to do just exactly that. Congratulations on a damn hot start. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Loved it, very erotic and visual...and arousing...the dad is a lucky guy!
Very nice sex scenes. I was sort of disappointed that ALL of them were one-on-one, though. Maybe the two girls will share with Mom their secret in a future episode, and it will excite her so much that the three of them decide to get down, hmm? Just a thought, hotpup. Heh.